tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post3822040230447818463..comments2009-06-12T13:21:02.808-05:00ForestJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05536396154296555583noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-85735654090079667732009-06-12T13:21:02.808-05:002009-06-12T13:21:02.808-05:00I liked the story, and the ending with the dry martini. I liked the picture of the strange jungle gym, too.<br /><br />Stephen from Scottsdale, Arizona, USA<br />http://stephen-has-spoken.blogspot.com/Stephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05652404381086061102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-60670357023006652402009-06-09T20:30:47.867-05:002009-06-09T20:30:47.867-05:00What a great bit of writing, even without the challenge!desertskyquiltshttp://desertskyquilts.livejournal.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-83157837047895716442009-06-09T04:44:53.031-05:002009-06-09T04:44:53.031-05:00Nice piece of writing.CJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11105598015852813723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-23931769841676586342009-06-07T09:57:29.212-05:002009-06-07T09:57:29.212-05:00I love it. Very sweet and unusual use of the words. Nice surprise.Nessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-27428224281855046352009-06-06T19:06:39.818-05:002009-06-06T19:06:39.818-05:00a wonderful Mom story!Diannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-44965636894497575492009-06-06T10:55:56.565-05:002009-06-06T10:55:56.565-05:00You humans are so weird.You have so many problems with offspring. Very good story capturing one of the problems.Fandangohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09256198358069576958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-63135976065382283722009-06-06T10:05:40.546-05:002009-06-06T10:05:40.546-05:00Love the dry martini idea! Wonderful. This was sweet and lovely. I can see it happening. I agree with others about the jungle gym analogy.Ravenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-14959953631546649322009-06-06T09:30:15.028-05:002009-06-06T09:30:15.028-05:00Very good - I love the barbiness of this story!<br /><br /><a href="http://blog.mommywizdom.com" rel="nofollow">MommyWizdom</a>MommyWhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06112938837270025929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-19056668061082805312009-06-06T06:57:00.871-05:002009-06-06T06:57:00.871-05:00I liked the description of the relationship between mother and son as a twisted jungle gym. The picture added.bettygramhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07039975744716330002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-7718651959507958452009-06-06T06:11:26.761-05:002009-06-06T06:11:26.761-05:00Such a creative use of these very hard words. I could even feel myself in the story. It was great.Dr.Johnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02752941912945095736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-33695738756963685342009-06-06T04:48:10.513-05:002009-06-06T04:48:10.513-05:00Aha the pains of growing up! You did a fantastic job with this week&#39;s words, I liked it very much. <br /><br />I particularly liked this:<br /><br /><i>Having a conversation with him was like playing tag on a twisted jungle gym. If I were climbing up, then he&#39;d be maneuvering away from me down the other side.</i><br /><br />Very descriptive. :)Akelamaluhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.com