tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post9018581496726206173..comments2023-10-30T08:18:47.038-05:00Comments on ForestJane Designs: Wordzzle SaturdayForestJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05536396154296555583noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-18850763627014486762009-06-03T12:35:53.741-05:002009-06-03T12:35:53.741-05:00Avery entertaining and unusual story. Great use of...Avery entertaining and unusual story. Great use of the words.Nessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-42548292214020293742009-06-02T22:59:24.378-05:002009-06-02T22:59:24.378-05:00Such writing talent stirs the imagination and want...Such writing talent stirs the imagination and wants to know more of the story; what happens next? You have a gift of writing as well as gardening and a lovely delivery.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00593372339902254516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-54642066322759035812009-06-02T12:24:53.944-05:002009-06-02T12:24:53.944-05:00Hee!!!!Hee!!!!julieQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00509047751868460895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-81308815351841030612009-05-31T20:47:21.961-05:002009-05-31T20:47:21.961-05:00I liked your story about the three old widow women...I liked your story about the three old widow women. It seemed very real and true to life.<br /><br />Stephen from Scottsdale, Arizona, USA<br />http://stephen-has-spoken.blogspot.com/Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652404381086061102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-44665295626672318902009-05-31T19:17:08.483-05:002009-05-31T19:17:08.483-05:00what an intimate portrait of aging! I feel as tho...what an intimate portrait of aging! I feel as though I have been handed a set of binoculars.<br /><br /> 3 solitary crows, maintaining a socially prescribed distance. Eagerly awaiting daily circulars, but too proud to turn to each other for comfort.<br /><br />“tiny pickle forks clank dissonantly”. .gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-52352634977739070432009-05-30T13:55:25.467-05:002009-05-30T13:55:25.467-05:00What a lovely and touching story. A wonderful slic...What a lovely and touching story. A wonderful slice of life piece including pictures. Wow, you really knocked it out of the park this week. <br /><br />Please continue with this kind of writing, it is obvious how much empathy and talent you put into your offerings.<br /><br />ThanksRichardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17028871782757014447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-66135415503046347022009-05-30T11:36:01.970-05:002009-05-30T11:36:01.970-05:00while I laughed at the crows line and the imagery ...while I laughed at the crows line and the imagery I also felt so sad and lonely - and that make it great writing<br /><br />this is a beautful piece about how being older or frail can make you invisible<br /><br />well done!Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-58452232302652252492009-05-30T10:31:21.491-05:002009-05-30T10:31:21.491-05:00You must have spent time on our block because we k...You must have spent time on our block because we know those three old ladies. They are a hoot. You have captured them perfectly.Fandangohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09256198358069576958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-68942158307214095372009-05-30T10:14:33.374-05:002009-05-30T10:14:33.374-05:00Beautifully done. Three interesting characters.Beautifully done. Three interesting characters.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-86921455504489618692009-05-30T09:29:27.088-05:002009-05-30T09:29:27.088-05:00You show the day to day life of a few of the elder...You show the day to day life of a few of the elderly.bettygramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039975744716330002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-79147676696440386152009-05-30T07:17:00.414-05:002009-05-30T07:17:00.414-05:00Wow! I know those woman. I used to visit those lad...Wow! I know those woman. I used to visit those ladies. You certainly are a creative writer and with those words. Wow!Dr.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02752941912945095736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-67364000862705631212009-05-30T06:04:06.094-05:002009-05-30T06:04:06.094-05:00Poignant and charming! I'll have a complete differ...Poignant and charming! I'll have a complete different perspective about the older ladies today when I visit the Farmer's Market!Reston Friends!https://www.blogger.com/profile/09284723582614269862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24621229.post-64465405799269735672009-05-30T05:01:32.980-05:002009-05-30T05:01:32.980-05:00I love this line
like crows in a row on the telep...I love this line<br /><br /><B>like crows in a row on the telephone wire</B>and your whole description of the widow-women absolutely brings them to life. Great use of the words, I really enjoyed this. :)<br /><br />Mine's up too.Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.com